Update wording in readme (#165)

README.md

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-    Easy way to run 100B+ language models without high-end GPUs<br>
-    by joining compute resources with people across the Internet.<br>
-    Up to 10x faster than offloading<br><br>
+    Run 100B+ language models at home, BitTorrent-style.<br>
+    Fine-tuning and inference up to 10x faster than offloading<br><br>
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 Generate text using distributed BLOOM and fine-tune it for your own tasks:
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 ## How it works?
 
-- **Petals** runs inference or fine-tunes large language models like [BLOOM-176B](https://huggingface.co/bigscience/bloom) by joining compute resources with people all over the Internet.
-- One participant with weak GPU can load a small part of the model, then team up with people serving the other parts to run inference or fine-tuning.
+- Petals runs large language models like BLOOM-176B **collaboratively** — you load a small part of the model, then team up with people serving the other parts to run inference or fine-tuning.
 - Inference runs at ≈ 1 sec per step (token) — 10x faster than possible with offloading, enough for chatbots and other interactive apps. Parallel inference reaches hundreds of tokens/sec.
-- Beyond classic language model APIs — you can employ any fine-tuning and sampling methods by executing custom paths through the model or accessing its hidden states. This combines the comforts of an API with the flexibility of PyTorch.
+- Beyond classic language model APIs — you can employ any fine-tuning and sampling methods by executing custom paths through the model or accessing its hidden states. You get the comforts of an API with the flexibility of PyTorch.
 
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